I saw its yellow sign glowing.
I remember going through the drive-thru
My mum, she drove me there
The McDonald’s ice cream machine working
I had a craving for cheeseburger
We gave the dog some fries
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Hi Alex, Love you're poem and how random it is. Mine was about finding a lime, I honestly had No idea what I was doing but maybe you can write better than me. maybe you could write some more of these poems on you're blog!
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-Addison
hi Alex i think your work is awsome ithink your needs a little more info but your work is great
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