Tuesday, June 12, 2018
Roberts writing challenge
I have just committed the most sinister crime of all time, theft. I was sitting at the table waiting for dinner when I saw the last fortune cookie lying on a tray, waiting to be eaten. I asked my mother if I could have it and she said, “no” because it was for my father. Disgruntled with her answer I waited till she left the room to go to the bathroom. After emerging from my seat I slowly crept to the tray and grabbed the fortune cookie, it was at that moment I realized the guardian of the fortune cookie sitting next to the tray, my dog. As soon as I grabbed it he started barking like crazy. All of a sudden I heard loud thumps on the wooden hallway floor.
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ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because Ilike the way you use descriptive words such as ‘sinister’
ReplyDeleteDid you know I like dogs as well and my dog always stands by food.
Next time, you could look at adding more detail about your lovely dog
Why did you choose to write about fortune cookies?
This is amazing because l like how you write sinister crim
ReplyDeleteDid you know I think that your mum will be mad at you
Next time, you could eat it quick
Why did you… take the cookie from the table naughty boy